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Mantis: A Fable
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07-31-2020, 01:23 AM
Thank you so much for the feedback! Yes, I will have to make those edits as you suggest. I am very slow so it will take awhile. Yes, I was worried about "weaker". It is from the POV of the evil person/rapist and not the writer which is why I used "scare quotes" but I think it is still confusing and offensive. Perhaps opposite sex might work better there.
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Mantis: A Fable - by Torkelburger - 07-31-2020, 12:08 AM
RE: Mantis: A Fable - by Knot - 07-31-2020, 01:01 AM
RE: Mantis: A Fable - by Torkelburger - 07-31-2020, 01:23 AM
RE: Mantis: A Fable - by Knot - 07-31-2020, 08:02 PM
RE: Mantis: A Fable - by Torkelburger - 08-04-2020, 12:58 AM
RE: Mantis: A Fable - by Knot - 08-04-2020, 01:39 AM
RE: Mantis: A Fable - by Torkelburger - 08-05-2020, 12:14 AM
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