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Before the rain
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07-23-2020, 02:16 AM
Thanks for feedback both... without wanting to have too many metaphors (which there may now be) I have made some more edits. The poem is trying to capture a feeling of loss and the impermanence of our daily lives - pegging the linen late into the day when the air is warm and will dry quickly is risky when that is also liable to change very fast
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Before the rain - by penneddown - 07-20-2020, 02:18 AM
RE: Before the rain - by Tiger the Lion - 07-20-2020, 07:50 AM
RE: Before the rain - by penneddown - 07-20-2020, 06:06 PM
RE: Before the rain - by Knot - 07-20-2020, 09:06 PM
RE: Before the rain - by penneddown - 07-20-2020, 09:34 PM
RE: Before the rain - by Knot - 07-20-2020, 10:20 PM
RE: Before the rain - by penneddown - 07-22-2020, 10:05 AM
RE: Before the rain - by Caravano - 07-22-2020, 10:39 AM
RE: Before the rain - by penneddown - 07-23-2020, 02:16 AM
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