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Cultivate The Living Flower
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07-03-2020, 10:58 AM
(07-03-2020, 04:13 AM)Exit Wrote:  Cultivate the Living Flower

It's time to recalibrate your focus.
This world's not your footnote
but opus.

Let's live twice as free
as they want us to be

and give like we're giving
what's owed us.
This is admirable, IMHO. And, though critique was not requested, if "your" were to be removed from L1 it would become a perfect limerick.
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Cultivate The Living Flower - by Exit - 07-03-2020, 04:13 AM
RE: Cultivate The Living Flower - by dukealien - 07-03-2020, 10:58 AM
RE: Cultivate The Living Flower - by Exit - 07-03-2020, 12:28 PM
RE: Cultivate The Living Flower - by Exit - 07-03-2020, 02:53 PM
RE: Cultivate The Living Flower - by rowens - 07-04-2020, 07:20 AM
RE: Cultivate The Living Flower - by Exit - 07-04-2020, 07:54 AM



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