Terror & Whimsy
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Thanks Duke, I made the title after only writing the first stanza - I thought the mask represented terror and whimsy well, as well as the childs smile and the mothers scowl. I agree that for the poem as a whole, I could come up with something better, I will think on it.

I know nothing about stitching/embroidery, so I could probably improve that part too by looking into how to accurately describe it, although the idea for the mask was really more abstract than something real - sort of a silly gag like you would see in a cartoon. I may look into that a bit more.
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Terror & Whimsy - by Wjames - 06-01-2020, 01:32 AM
RE: Terror & Whimsy - by dukealien - 06-01-2020, 08:37 AM
RE: Terror & Whimsy - by Wjames - 06-01-2020, 10:22 AM
RE: Terror & Whimsy - by whyelliswhy - 06-06-2020, 06:01 AM
RE: Terror & Whimsy - by Mark A Becker - 06-10-2020, 10:44 AM



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