05-07-2020, 08:04 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-07-2020, 08:04 AM by Tiger the Lion.)
(04-30-2020, 06:13 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Well, well, well, then... no man left behind it is, though the current apocolypse has indeed left many behind.Thanks Mark. It is bewildering to me that a country so in love with its troops cannot muster 2 months of common sense without going AWOL. If I were History, I wouldn't look too kindly on us.
The second and third stanzas resonate with me, while the first and fourth not as much.
That said, my favorite lines are:
" the moon waxes
with the bottle's wane"
Perhaps "while" instead of "with" ? I'm sure sure you wrestled those lines already, so I'll just drink it in as presented.
Interesting take on our current situation...
Thanks,
Mark
