04-10-2020, 07:55 PM
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Hi Alicia-Sophia.
I also have an issue with the tenses, but I'd opt for making this all in the present tense,
and, following the title, have it adhere as closely to the form of a letter as possible -
maybe make the writer of the letter one of the "They" of lines two and three?
I enjoyed the irony (but don't think you need to emphasise it, for example "integral" in L3).
Best, Knot
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Hi Alicia-Sophia.
I also have an issue with the tenses, but I'd opt for making this all in the present tense,
and, following the title, have it adhere as closely to the form of a letter as possible -
maybe make the writer of the letter one of the "They" of lines two and three?
I enjoyed the irony (but don't think you need to emphasise it, for example "integral" in L3).
Best, Knot
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