NaPM, April 6, 2020
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(04-07-2020, 05:47 AM)dukealien Wrote:  The Leader, of His Bride


The essence of a crowd or mob
is underrated.  See, it runs
toward a goal its heart defines
with passion and its arms upraised
or when affrighted coyly flees
as from a whiff of grapeshot or
a charge of iron-shod dragoons.
One fellow wrote a mob of men
behaves as if it were one woman–
what, I ask, could be more charming?



(04-06-2020, 11:17 PM)Todd Wrote:  Keith nice imagery. In the context, do you mean choir not quire?
I thought so, too, but the image of tree frogs as pamphlet-folded paper is arresting, isn't it?
It could be if that's the intention. What makes me pause is the rhyme between the words. That's why I wanted to check as opposed to saying, caught a typo because there may be no typo at all. It's a good poem.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by Quixilated - 04-06-2020, 09:51 PM
RE: NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by Keith - 04-06-2020, 10:56 PM
RE: NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by Todd - 04-06-2020, 11:15 PM
RE: NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by Todd - 04-06-2020, 11:17 PM
RE: NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by Keith - 04-07-2020, 08:17 AM
RE: NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by dukealien - 04-07-2020, 05:47 AM
RE: NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by Todd - 04-07-2020, 06:48 AM
RE: NaPM, April 6, 2020 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-08-2020, 05:55 AM



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