04-07-2020, 06:48 AM
(04-07-2020, 05:47 AM)dukealien Wrote: The Leader, of His BrideIt could be if that's the intention. What makes me pause is the rhyme between the words. That's why I wanted to check as opposed to saying, caught a typo because there may be no typo at all. It's a good poem.
The essence of a crowd or mob
is underrated. See, it runs
toward a goal its heart defines
with passion and its arms upraised
or when affrighted coyly flees
as from a whiff of grapeshot or
a charge of iron-shod dragoons.
One fellow wrote a mob of men
behaves as if it were one woman–
what, I ask, could be more charming?
(04-06-2020, 11:17 PM)Todd Wrote: Keith nice imagery. In the context, do you mean choir not quire?I thought so, too, but the image of tree frogs as pamphlet-folded paper is arresting, isn't it?
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
