Honor

[savannah]

Any suggestions or criticism is completely welcome. I haven't written in forever, and really fell out of it, please, anything is helpful. 

You ran, 
I stumbled,
You eased, 
I struggled,
You look down on me, 
But I am stronger, 
I overcame my past, 
Tiptoed through the rubble,
No one knew my pain, 
That I overcame
My path was harder, 
But here I stand
Made it another day
Humbly, 
I accept the honor.

A nice, simple poem. I would probably prefer a little show vs. tell, as to showing us how you're stronger? Other than that, I like the sentiment behind the poem.