April Fools
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This was a deep poem. I definitely could feel the emotion as I read through each line. I love the imagery of money woven throughout each stanza. I thought the use of money as a metaphor to express the way the poet was being treated was expressed very clearly and jumped out quite distinctly. I also liked the theme of love--which like money, interest, stocks, etc.--can be a loss or a gain. Anyway, I liked your poem Smile
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April Fools - by Erthona - 04-01-2020, 06:10 PM
RE: April Fools - by Cat - 04-02-2020, 01:00 AM
RE: April Fools - by Erthona - 04-02-2020, 02:36 AM
RE: April Fools - by Cat - 04-02-2020, 02:37 AM
RE: April Fools - by Mark A Becker - 04-30-2020, 06:17 AM
RE: April Fools - by Erthona - 08-16-2020, 01:49 AM



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