03-08-2020, 06:52 AM
Duke,
This piece rains commas and the font seems less than desirable.
"green swale rolling" "Green swale", sure, but rolling IDK.
Loved the third stanza and overall a pretty nice poem, but the last stanza/line ruined it for me.
travelogue: a lecture, slide show, or motion picture describing travels. How does that fit on a flag?Even more, why should I care? Please explicate.
best,
dale
This piece rains commas and the font seems less than desirable.
"green swale rolling" "Green swale", sure, but rolling IDK.
Loved the third stanza and overall a pretty nice poem, but the last stanza/line ruined it for me.
travelogue: a lecture, slide show, or motion picture describing travels. How does that fit on a flag?Even more, why should I care? Please explicate.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.