Emily the death of me

[Knot]

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Hi Dale,
lines 3 and 6 also make me a bit twitchy,
and I'm not sure the ending really delivers.


Just a thought


“Because I could not stop for Death” *
he would not stop for me
e'en though I wept and pled
he took unwilling me.
So do take heed my mortal friends
surrender foolish pride
for if you greet him properly
then gentle be the ride.




Best, Knot


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