Jordan Peterson - edit2

[dukealien]

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Jordan Peterson


He floated comatose, detached,
forgetting poisoned memory
of artificial peace.

He rises pale and sensible,
bright river of clear common sense
its enemies had dammed.

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Thanks to both critics.  A fairly radical revision, but the subject seems to demand simplicity and clarity rather than classical allusions now you mention it.

The knaves are gone, replaced by enemies of common sense - some might say a greater knavery.   Trolls, we all know.