02-12-2020, 04:11 AM
(02-11-2020, 11:45 PM)Cesar Wrote: Any suggestions or criticism is completely welcome. I haven't written in forever, and really fell out of it, please, anything is helpful.The punctuation needs some attending to, but otherwise a plain and simple message (in a good way)![]()
You ran,
I stumbled,
You eased,
I struggled,
You look down on me,
But I am stronger,
I overcame my past,
Tiptoed through the rubble,
No one knew my pain,
That I overcame
My path was harder,
But here I stand
Made it another day
Humbly,
I accept the honor.

