02-12-2020, 01:27 AM
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Hi Cesar,
I'm not sure you're title's really helping you, it might be worth a second look.
I'd also consider trimming, somewhat. (What happened to the 'you' of the first
part?)
Just food for thought ...
Humble.
I overcame my past,
Tiptoed through rubble,
[the] harder path
No one knew
That I overcame
But I Made it here
another day
Best, Knot
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Hi Cesar,
I'm not sure you're title's really helping you, it might be worth a second look.
I'd also consider trimming, somewhat. (What happened to the 'you' of the first
part?)
Just food for thought ...
Humble.
I overcame my past,
Tiptoed through rubble,
[the] harder path
No one knew
That I overcame
But I Made it here
another day
Best, Knot
.