01-09-2020, 01:14 AM
Knot,
Thanks for clearing that up. From what it sounds like I have my work cut out for me
It's great you're asking this question about my intended audience because, aside from your feedback, the question has me reevaluating how the story should be told. I would like the story to be told as if it was a folk tale, but one that originated from the world I described. I'm thinking it's one that could be told to the children on that world and maybe the charm of that idea can reach an audience on this world of all ages (lmao). Maybe the idea behind the narration and my intended audience is convoluted, but I hope that the next draft I post here won't be that.
Do you know of any short stories or authors that demonstrate this quality of storytelling that I could study?
Alex
Thanks for clearing that up. From what it sounds like I have my work cut out for me
It's great you're asking this question about my intended audience because, aside from your feedback, the question has me reevaluating how the story should be told. I would like the story to be told as if it was a folk tale, but one that originated from the world I described. I'm thinking it's one that could be told to the children on that world and maybe the charm of that idea can reach an audience on this world of all ages (lmao). Maybe the idea behind the narration and my intended audience is convoluted, but I hope that the next draft I post here won't be that.
Do you know of any short stories or authors that demonstrate this quality of storytelling that I could study?
Alex