12-26-2019, 05:34 AM
Thank you for the encouragement and suggestion. Here’s version 2 after some reading and editing.
You left me the key to your empty room,
Within which my heart lay, a rune,
Suffering the silence of verses unread,
Spilled ink from my veins languished in bed.
I shook off the dust and lit pages on fire
Take back your key and absent inquire!
Ash you’ll step into upon your return,
Proof I was there before we adjourned.
You left me the key to your empty room,
Within which my heart lay, a rune,
Suffering the silence of verses unread,
Spilled ink from my veins languished in bed.
I shook off the dust and lit pages on fire
Take back your key and absent inquire!
Ash you’ll step into upon your return,
Proof I was there before we adjourned.