Manifesto

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Manifesto

Pop always told me
y'all were out to murder
God. How you'd never be happy
till His name was outlawed
and His body defiled.
Said duty might one day
call upon me to roll the stone away,
and how I best get to building
some muscle, and figurin'
just what I'm gonna do
about the guards.

Well folks, I done it all perfect
and I'm writing it down
all clever-like
so the TV don't say I'm a nut.
Y'all are the nuts -
I'm just makin' my daddy proud.

I like this. I like how what we learn from our parents doesn't always get learned as they intended. One small suggestion. I think "y'all out to murder" is a better fit with the colloquial language than "y'all were out to murder"