11-06-2019, 02:58 PM
Ah, feedback is always welcome!
George Meredith is a canonical author, but I haven't really read him -- I should, though! As for David Bowie, I'm not sure if he counts as a canonical author, though this song of his is one that reads exceptionally well.
I agree in reaching for profundity that isn't there, though I wouldn't quite characterize it as trying, at least speaking as the author. At least, with this piece of work, I was considering banality, hence the argument of the first strophe that is really as old as the lyric.
George Meredith is a canonical author, but I haven't really read him -- I should, though! As for David Bowie, I'm not sure if he counts as a canonical author, though this song of his is one that reads exceptionally well.
I agree in reaching for profundity that isn't there, though I wouldn't quite characterize it as trying, at least speaking as the author. At least, with this piece of work, I was considering banality, hence the argument of the first strophe that is really as old as the lyric.