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She Said.
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09-21-2019, 11:37 AM
Really enjoyed the poem. You used great imagery to depict the turmoil and inner conflict the character is having. Anyone can relate to the spaces out staring at the world kind of stress (I think). Only critique I can think of is maybe better rhyming between the first verse? You made the other two flow in a rhyme so it just seems a little bit off maybe? Great poem though, thoroughly enjoyed.
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RE: She Said. - by WordOnWord - 09-08-2019, 02:13 AM
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