Karl’s Labor's Lost

Karl’s Labor's Lost - edit2

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09-13-2019, 04:04 AM

I like the concept. It’s an interesting idea and well put
My suggestion would be to make it less didactic.
Both “overthrow” and “expired” are too much authorial intrusion

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Karl’s Labor's Lost - edit2 - by dukealien - 09-11-2019, 11:04 PM

RE: Karl’s Demise - by busker - 09-13-2019, 04:04 AM

RE: Karl’s Demise - by dukealien - 09-13-2019, 06:23 AM

RE: Karl’s Demise - by dukealien - 09-16-2019, 05:15 AM

RE: Karl’s Labor's Lost - edit, title change - by Knot - 09-16-2019, 09:31 PM

RE: Karl’s Labor's Lost - edit, title change - by alonso ramoran - 09-25-2019, 02:54 AM

RE: Karl’s Labor's Lost - edit2 - by dukealien - 10-01-2019, 05:36 AM

RE: Karl’s Labor's Lost - edit, title change - by BrandonD - 10-01-2019, 05:37 AM

RE: Karl’s Labor's Lost - edit, title change - by dukealien - 10-01-2019, 05:41 AM

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