Echoes

[busker]

Echoes (Senryu)


Women’s loud complaints
penetrate motel’s thin walls—
life, or NPR?

NPR = National Public Radio (US)

I like this.
On the NPR (never heard of it, just assuming that it is what a liberal left dominated taxpayer funded establishment would be like), as in life, the complaints of angry feminists wanting to push invisible boundaries must be loud.

The second line is too long with “penetrate”
Maybe “soak”?