The Calling
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I watched an Icelandic thriller last night, some men killed dozens of random people in the US recently, and I am now listening to Alfred Schnittke, so I feel in the right mood with this enigmatic poem. I am wondering what The Event is, i.e. the wake, the lifting & thinning of the air, etc. It's like the world ends but we don't know what it is, and in the end, it's only a charade. Perhaps you'd wish to expose the catastrophic happening a bit more, or hide it more, if it's an illusion in the end..

I'm not 100% sure about the listing of workers, why do we need it..

I like the smirk, although I wonder if it's heavy enough. In the thriller I watched, the villain smirks when dying, it feels like a cliché, villains smurking..
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The Calling - by cloud - 06-16-2019, 05:05 PM
RE: The Calling - by dukealien - 06-18-2019, 10:41 PM
RE: The Calling - by Seraphim - 06-19-2019, 11:09 PM
RE: The Calling - by Frenchie - 08-07-2019, 12:04 AM
RE: The Calling - by cloud - 08-13-2019, 12:18 PM
RE: The Calling - by AlexTheAsian21 - 09-21-2019, 11:31 PM
RE: The Calling - by Xlateralus - 09-28-2019, 09:26 AM
RE: The Calling - by cloud - 10-01-2019, 03:29 PM
RE: The Calling - by ink - 10-06-2019, 01:29 AM
RE: The Calling - by Xlateralus - 10-15-2019, 11:38 AM



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