08-07-2019, 12:04 AM
I watched an Icelandic thriller last night, some men killed dozens of random people in the US recently, and I am now listening to Alfred Schnittke, so I feel in the right mood with this enigmatic poem. I am wondering what The Event is, i.e. the wake, the lifting & thinning of the air, etc. It's like the world ends but we don't know what it is, and in the end, it's only a charade. Perhaps you'd wish to expose the catastrophic happening a bit more, or hide it more, if it's an illusion in the end..
I'm not 100% sure about the listing of workers, why do we need it..
I like the smirk, although I wonder if it's heavy enough. In the thriller I watched, the villain smirks when dying, it feels like a cliché, villains smurking..
I'm not 100% sure about the listing of workers, why do we need it..
I like the smirk, although I wonder if it's heavy enough. In the thriller I watched, the villain smirks when dying, it feels like a cliché, villains smurking..
