Air

[Richard]

Hey EMK,
I feel like you got something here. However, you need to get more specific in your approach:

Air

The air around her changed -I like this line. You just need to explain it more. What does this look like? What does this smell like? You need some more specific images to make this poem stronger.
From airy
Now estranged 
Blooming forcefully 
Bright colors 
Faded 
Forgot the water
Forgot the sun
Forgot -One other thing, be careful with repeating words in such a short piece. Challenge yourself and rewrite these "forgot" lines without repeating "forgot" or even without using the word "forgot" at all. That might prove a worthwhile poetic exercise.
Her air

I hope you take the time to edit this because I would love to see where you take this poem from here.

Thanks for the read,
Richard