Audio: Time to Waste (song)
#2
Good images, catchy beat (conversational reading).  Not sure I agree with changing/opening up "myself" in S2:  the rest of the lyric is entirely centered on the speaker, it would jar a little to bring in friends or companions at just that one spot.  On the other hand, it could be an uphill-to-there and then downhill back to self-centeredness.

Quite enjoyable.  Thanks!
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Time to Waste (song) - by Wjames - 07-02-2019, 04:10 PM
RE: Time to Waste (song) - by dukealien - 07-05-2019, 05:52 AM



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