Borrower and Lender Be - Edit

[Knot]

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I like the idea duke, but the language seems to be a bit unbalanced. Overall it has a formal tone which
isn't maintained. ('Information's key' is a bit sore thumbish, for instance.)


I think 'promise' could be elaborated upon, establish the significance of the term before moving to 'lend'.
(To owe is to have promised, and a promise is ... )

I think S2/S3 could both begin with the same phrase, "Absent trust, what remains ...


Not getting the hawk/pigeon reference (but that's likely my fault) though did enjoy the Delphic nod.


Best, Knot.

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