06-16-2019, 11:09 AM
I find a few things here confusing and am tempted to critique - for example, could do with about 3% fewer words.
The format, mostly single-line sentences after the first verse, is disturbing at first, then puts me in mind of pacing off the distance between one scene of destruction or decay and the next.
Makes a strong impression; wonder if, given the date, this is a historical reference.
The format, mostly single-line sentences after the first verse, is disturbing at first, then puts me in mind of pacing off the distance between one scene of destruction or decay and the next.
Makes a strong impression; wonder if, given the date, this is a historical reference.
Non-practicing atheist