05-04-2019, 12:22 PM
Hey UselessBlueprint,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm a little confused with some of what you said though. Are you saying that this poem isn't poetic enough, or suggesting it would be better written in a more formal form. or both?
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I'm a little confused with some of what you said though. Are you saying that this poem isn't poetic enough, or suggesting it would be better written in a more formal form. or both?
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.