03-12-2019, 09:53 AM
Hello, lovely poem. I like the wordplay on Grapes of Wrath. I love the way the narrator is only half sorry, like he does feel sort of bad, but would do it all over again in a heartbeat. It reminds me in a pleasant way of "This is Just to Say" by William Carlos Williams. I like the second stanza best, for that is the part that holds the confession as well as the sort of "rubbing it in your face" feel that makes one think the narrator isn't as sorry as he is trying to look.
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara