02-20-2019, 11:27 AM
is it about slash and burn practices, or wild-fires?
i get the latter stanza and like it. the first stanza loses me a little. maybe it's due to the punctuation. [i'm not good with punctuation] it makes me falter trying to work it out better. for instance, should open window flames, have a hyphen after window? the transition form the 2nd line to third also threw me somewhat.
i get the latter stanza and like it. the first stanza loses me a little. maybe it's due to the punctuation. [i'm not good with punctuation] it makes me falter trying to work it out better. for instance, should open window flames, have a hyphen after window? the transition form the 2nd line to third also threw me somewhat.