02-08-2019, 07:12 AM
I think it would be better if you stuck with the three types of wishing and some variation of the second to last stanza. Unless you're specifically trying to do something 'other' with the form.
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Wishes (edit V.2) - by Cesar - 02-07-2019, 08:14 AM
RE: Wishes - by rowens - 02-07-2019, 08:35 AM
RE: Wishes - by Cesar - 02-07-2019, 09:48 AM
RE: Wishes - by ellajam - 02-07-2019, 10:18 PM
RE: Wishes - by Cesar - 02-07-2019, 10:49 PM
RE: Wishes - by ellajam - 02-08-2019, 04:50 AM
RE: Wishes (edit V.2) - by rowens - 02-08-2019, 07:12 AM
RE: Wishes (edit V.2) - by Quixilated - 02-16-2019, 04:45 AM
RE: Wishes (edit V.2) - by Xlateralus - 02-17-2019, 06:13 AM
RE: Wishes (edit V.2) - by billy - 02-17-2019, 05:33 PM
Wishes - (please criticize, due for contest tomorrow) - by Cesar - 02-15-2019, 06:20 AM
RE: Wishes - (please criticize, due for contest tomorrow) - by Xlateralus - 02-15-2019, 07:10 AM
RE: Wishes - (please criticize, due for contest tomorrow) - by Cesar - 02-15-2019, 08:46 AM
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