02-07-2019, 10:04 AM
(02-07-2019, 07:59 AM)rowens Wrote: I don't see any difference. Or any reason for there've been any changes made. It's something that can be made essential by other poems. That's the way it seems. Quick and self-explanatory.that's the form, and do you think that adds or subtracts to the essence of the poem?
The form you mentioned is characteristic of how I usually deliver my poetry, and it's my suspicion the tone tends to come off as flat and no different than depressing truisms to lull your sense of discomfort
assholery not intended .