02-06-2019, 04:58 AM
I love the poem, it has a fun and excited tone, however the rhyme scheme was a little off, just read over it a couple times. The poem has great potential, and is in a great place to begin with. 
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Sure Fire (edit) - by CRNDLSM - 12-23-2018, 11:57 AM
RE: Sure Fire (from poetry practice exercises) - by alonso ramoran - 01-02-2019, 02:17 PM
RE: Sure Fire (edit) - by CRNDLSM - 01-03-2019, 02:44 AM
RE: Sure Fire (edit) - by Cesar - 02-06-2019, 04:58 AM
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