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The Launch
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02-04-2019, 06:00 PM
Hello Alatos; your poem for me was as far as the writing very well done, then there is the flow, not easy for me to follow. First the garden then ferns and mosses. Later vegetable and cicadas, the day changed pulled me in, then the next stanzas felt like too much filler until the good stuff returned
Someday the Mystery will be known
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