Sure Fire (edit)
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Thanks Alex I hope this reads easier, rewrote two of the rhymes s3l2, s4l2. I've never been good at meter, ae freislighe seemed to work best as a conversation for the repeats beginning and ending of each stanza.
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Sure Fire (edit) - by CRNDLSM - 12-23-2018, 11:57 AM
RE: Sure Fire (edit) - by CRNDLSM - 01-03-2019, 02:44 AM
RE: Sure Fire (edit) - by Cesar - 02-06-2019, 04:58 AM



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