Edit 1: Bedtime Clichés

Edit 1: Bedtime Clichés

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01-02-2019, 02:20 AM

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I’ll try to make some tweaks around your suggestions. Todd, I’m still trying to understand the passive voice critique. Maybe you could point out the lines where this issue stands out?

Kind regards,
Alex

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Edit 1: Bedtime Clichés - by alonso ramoran - 12-31-2018, 01:57 PM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by ellajam - 12-31-2018, 06:38 PM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by Knot - 12-31-2018, 11:06 PM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by ellajam - 01-01-2019, 07:08 AM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by Todd - 01-01-2019, 10:18 PM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by alonso ramoran - 01-02-2019, 02:20 AM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by Richard - 01-02-2019, 04:08 AM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by Truerenigma - 01-02-2019, 02:27 PM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by billy - 01-02-2019, 02:56 PM

RE: Bedtime Clichés - by ellajam - 01-02-2019, 05:46 PM

RE: Edit 1: Bedtime Clichés - by alonso ramoran - 01-03-2019, 02:47 AM

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