01-01-2019, 10:18 PM
I had a hard time with the amount of passive voice in the poem. Perhaps consider addressing that issue.
Best,
Todd
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: Bedtime Clichés - by Knot - 12-31-2018, 11:06 PM
RE: Bedtime Clichés - by ellajam - 01-01-2019, 07:08 AM
RE: Bedtime Clichés - by Todd - 01-01-2019, 10:18 PM
RE: Bedtime Clichés - by alonso ramoran - 01-02-2019, 02:20 AM
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RE: Bedtime Clichés - by ellajam - 01-02-2019, 05:46 PM
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