Edit2 - Of the Laws

Edit2 - Of the Laws

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12-14-2018, 11:25 PM

@billy -

Thanks for the read. Hoping some will offer crit that supplies the added poetic sparkle to a flat, "translated by pedants" effect.

As to the quotes, it's a prosey old thing...

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Edit2 - Of the Laws - by dukealien - 12-14-2018, 10:40 AM

RE: Of the Laws - by billy - 12-14-2018, 11:38 AM

RE: Of the Laws - by dukealien - 12-14-2018, 11:25 PM

RE: Of the Laws - by Knot - 12-15-2018, 08:55 PM

RE: Of the Laws - by dukealien - 12-18-2018, 12:07 AM

RE: Edit - Of the Laws - by Knot - 12-18-2018, 08:28 PM

RE: Edit - Of the Laws - by busker - 12-20-2018, 08:39 PM

RE: Edit - Of the Laws - by dukealien - 12-21-2018, 12:33 AM

RE: Edit - Of the Laws - by Knot - 12-21-2018, 02:47 AM

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