12-12-2018, 08:44 AM
the second line and the forth line made me feel so uncomfortable. but swings and round about as ends positive. this is quite confusing poetry and I love the fact you have to think carefully of words to break it down.
(10-26-2018, 08:20 AM)Busker Wrote: Others have written
of matters important,
I on the other hand
have written but of you,
cajoling words
to sing like a linnet
of the green gold summer
where the light’s never fading
in the endless minute
that I’m sitting with you.
