Others have written
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the second line and the forth line made me feel so uncomfortable. but swings and round about as ends positive.  this is quite confusing poetry and I love the fact you have to think carefully of words to break it down.


(10-26-2018, 08:20 AM)Busker Wrote:  Others have written
of matters important,
I on the other hand
have written but of you,
cajoling words
to sing like a linnet
of the green gold summer
where the light’s never fading
in the endless minute
that I’m sitting with you.
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Others have written - by busker - 10-26-2018, 08:20 AM
RE: Others have written - by ellajam - 10-26-2018, 08:32 AM
RE: Others have written - by Quixilated - 10-27-2018, 05:48 AM
RE: Others have written - by billy - 10-27-2018, 03:18 PM
RE: Others have written - by busker - 10-28-2018, 02:39 AM
RE: Others have written - by Thunderembargo - 11-02-2018, 01:03 PM
RE: Others have written - by poemblind - 12-01-2018, 08:12 AM
RE: Others have written - by Knot - 12-01-2018, 11:11 PM
RE: Others have written - by busker - 12-02-2018, 06:49 PM
RE: Others have written - by pigpoem - 12-12-2018, 08:44 AM



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