Edit - On His Lady's Anger At His Politics

[Wildcard]

Hi there,

I thought this was pretty damned good. I'm not the biggest sonnet expert, but I did have a couple of thoughts.

Our trouble with your hatred, lady mine,

One thing I picked up from Leanne is that if you are going to twist grammar around like that, you need to have a really, really, really good reason. imo you don't need this

You cut and browbeat, love; I merely pine
for times when there were soft alternatives
to argument and silence, adjectives
that dripped with humor, pearls of wit divine.

My favorite part. A very flowery way of framing a familiar scene for me.