japan's wild west
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Second line brings some nice imagery. I don't understand the apostrophe in rustler's but overall it's a nice little haiku.
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japan's wild west - by billy - 11-15-2018, 12:30 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by dukealien - 11-16-2018, 12:45 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by alonso ramoran - 11-16-2018, 01:35 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by billy - 11-16-2018, 02:26 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by RiverNotch - 11-16-2018, 09:26 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by Keith - 11-17-2018, 02:06 AM
RE: japan's wild west - by billy - 11-18-2018, 04:27 PM



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