japan's wild west
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(11-15-2018, 12:30 PM)billy Wrote:  plum trees blossom pink
cow bells ring in the meadow
rustler's are busy
Subtle; nice images.  I try to [over]interpret the apostrophe on L3, then desist.

Alert guards on bamboo watchtowers, seeking fruitlessly for a reason bells sound in the darkness below.  One of them returns his bow to its case and brushes this spring haiku by the light of a hanging fire-pot.  He recites it to his comapanions, who laugh over sake bowls as thieves lead their prizes away.
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japan's wild west - by billy - 11-15-2018, 12:30 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by dukealien - 11-16-2018, 12:45 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by alonso ramoran - 11-16-2018, 01:35 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by billy - 11-16-2018, 02:26 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by RiverNotch - 11-16-2018, 09:26 PM
RE: japan's wild west - by Keith - 11-17-2018, 02:06 AM
RE: japan's wild west - by billy - 11-18-2018, 04:27 PM



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