11-12-2018, 09:29 AM
not sure of the lie break in line 4. i like how this is about ody being mad if nothing more than the fact he pretended to be mad to stop entering the trojan wars. i also like the use of p instead of penelope. it brings her into a modern realm. there's a goodish mix of myth and modern that the reader can be mistaken if they felt it was a real Odysseus in the nuthouse.
