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10-29-2018, 02:21 PM

hi cloud, there's a good image in the centre of the poem. and on the whole it reads well; that said, i'd love to see it as one stanza in a larger, more expanded poem.

(10-29-2018, 02:12 PM)cloud Wrote: by resting shores,
a gentle stream
softly crumbles
where all rivers arc
in seamless flow

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rock heart - by cloud - 10-29-2018, 02:12 PM

RE: rock heart - by billy - 10-29-2018, 02:21 PM

RE: rock heart - by cloud - 10-29-2018, 08:29 PM

RE: rock heart - by Ally - 10-31-2018, 04:14 AM

RE: rock heart - by billy - 10-31-2018, 12:25 PM

RE: rock heart - by cloud - 11-01-2018, 02:30 AM

RE: rock heart - by billy - 11-03-2018, 11:19 AM

RE: rock heart - by Ally - 11-01-2018, 04:10 AM

RE: rock heart - by Richard - 11-02-2018, 01:21 PM

RE: rock heart - by cloud - 11-03-2018, 06:54 AM

RE: rock heart - by Ally - 11-12-2018, 04:08 AM

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