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10-29-2018, 08:39 AM
Besides the typo I think the poem works perfectly. Not so sure about the title, but titles are generally less relevant to the content than the content itself. My favorite part is the short burst of aliterations just before the ending. It makes a nice rhythmic crescendo while it kinda bends the loss thing in neon. I'm not sure they had radios around Jesus' time tho.
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Static - by Tiger the Lion - 10-26-2018, 01:37 PM
RE: Static - by billy - 10-26-2018, 07:00 PM
RE: Static - by RiverNotch - 10-27-2018, 02:34 PM
RE: Static - by Leanne - 10-28-2018, 02:17 PM
RE: Static - by Keith - 10-29-2018, 07:39 AM
RE: Static - by Fredefup - 10-29-2018, 08:39 AM
RE: Static - by Tiger the Lion - 10-30-2018, 12:33 PM
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