09-27-2018, 05:45 AM
I often feel this way. I would have liked to read a part of the crowd that is brushing past you having to step around you or something. The imagery I got was that you were surrounded, and to collapse on the ground and have the imagery seem to loose those felt odd. I could see however that you collapse and its as if there is no one around, but I'm not sure that's what you were going for

