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Straitjacket
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09-21-2018, 07:08 PM
There is something off about this for me. I am not sure what night has to do with it all. A lot of the language is also sort of obvious. The rhyming is also just a little bad. For the amount of interest it holds it is way too long. Thats cheap to replace? Doesnt work. And the ending is just sort of bogus. We are left with nothing.
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Straitjacket - by TemporaryForever - 04-23-2018, 12:09 PM
RE: Straitjacket - by Richard - 05-25-2018, 08:04 AM
RE: Straitjacket - by wapiti - 06-06-2018, 10:44 PM
RE: Straitjacket - by rasen58 - 09-10-2018, 11:42 AM
RE: Straitjacket - by sonneteer - 09-21-2018, 07:08 PM
RE: Straitjacket - by billy - 09-24-2018, 09:22 AM
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