Deep Game
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Deep Game


Indoors I play a game, computerwise–
with people, streets, and buildings. There, it rains
in simulated torrents.  Lightning flies
and flashes, digital, from window-panes.

I wonder, could it be that deep inside
this view a man-shaped simulacrum sits
and plays a game where skies are clear and wide:
bytes forming into twice-imagined bits?

Outside, rain rattles down upon my roof
while thunder bumps my walls– or was that blast
a game-effect?  Can thinking offer proof
no gamer plays us, or that he’s the last?

Probably belongs in "For Fun," but how can this be made more striking, relevant, or just "deeper?"
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Deep Game - by dukealien - 09-20-2018, 09:54 PM
RE: Deep Game - by Knot - 09-21-2018, 12:56 AM
RE: Deep Game - by CRNDLSM - 09-24-2018, 01:01 AM
RE: Deep Game - by dukealien - 09-24-2018, 05:39 AM
RE: Deep Game - by Knot - 09-24-2018, 09:25 PM



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