08-10-2018, 03:56 AM
I never get any encouragement, so I don't know. But it seems like the person was trying to get you to write something that didn't bore him. Variations don't seem necessary to me. Maybe he meant it sounded too much like clockwork, tick tock tick tock.
Did he mean variation within the meter or variation in meter?
Did he mean variation within the meter or variation in meter?

