07-19-2018, 10:04 PM
Hey Elizazile,
Thanks for the feedback and kind words. One of my biggest concerns about this poem was the ending, so I'm quite glad that you thought that it worked with the rest of the poem. I noticed what you pointed out about the different stanzas having different feels to them. I need to give that some thought.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback and kind words. One of my biggest concerns about this poem was the ending, so I'm quite glad that you thought that it worked with the rest of the poem. I noticed what you pointed out about the different stanzas having different feels to them. I need to give that some thought.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.