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Thinker (revision 2)
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06-26-2018, 03:00 AM
It's the tone, I guess, that you're working on. To me it seems either to be attacking or making a joke at another's expense. Neither is a problem with me, but if that's all it is, it's not saying, or doing, much. Then again, it could be self-critical, self-pointing out, and the you is self-reflective. So either tone or the choice of words in such a close and small scene is the trouble. Or both.
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Thinker (revision 2) - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 08:54 PM
RE: Thinker - by dukealien - 06-24-2018, 10:56 PM
RE: Thinker - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 11:05 PM
RE: Thinker - by rowens - 06-24-2018, 11:48 PM
RE: Thinker - by allisonkreid - 06-25-2018, 12:03 AM
RE: Thinker - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 12:10 AM
RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by Knot - 06-25-2018, 10:01 PM
RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 11:41 PM
RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by allisonkreid - 06-26-2018, 01:35 AM
RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by rowens - 06-26-2018, 03:00 AM
RE: Thinker (revision 2) - by Richard - 06-27-2018, 11:46 AM
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